希望大家评分, 相信评判别人的作品是提高技术的一条途径. 我已经给许多这里的片子评了分, 希望和这里更多的朋友互评.

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什么机器拍的，感觉层次特好。

Nikon F80 （N80）AFD24mm

用了滤镜？

PL 偏振镜

那边的空气透视度非常好。

储存一些职业摄影师或准职业的评论：

Certainly a very different view of Arches! I like it a lot!

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Skip Layman
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posted 04-24-03 04:33 PM
I'm having trouble telling you why I like this shot, but it really works for me. The dead wood, the patch of vegetation in the FG, as well as the rock and sky hit me as a beautiful composition.

Skip Layman
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Bret
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posted 04-24-03 04:36 PM
I love this composition! My only nit is that the light seems a little harsh and flat. In sweeter light, this would be a KILLER shot. Where in the Park did you shoot this?
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kurtkyang
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posted 04-24-03 05:11 PM
agree with Bret about the light condition. I only stay there for 20 hours totally, including one overcast afternoon and camping free by the colorado river.

this is just a little bit walk from the trail to landscape arch.

[This message was edited by kurtkyang on 04-24-03 at 06:24 PM.]
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Harvey Edelman
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posted 04-24-03 05:24 PM
I don't know if the light is really what I'd call harsh. A more subdued light might make this a bit flat and some of the drama between the strong sky and strong foreground colors would be lost. Very nicely done. I wonder if more detail and texture could be brought out in the rock without oversharpening the image?

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Will V.
Forum Contributor
posted 04-24-03 05:35 PM
This is a very nice shot. The sky puts this to another level too.

My only concern is the sense of scale I get from this perspective. I always thought the arches were huge. Here the rock gives me the impression of something much smaller.

Will.

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Steve Mekata

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posted 04-24-03 05:55 PM
outstanding exposure, lovely color and comp!

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kurtkyang
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posted 04-24-03 06:13 PM
quote:


Hi Will, thanks. This is really a small piece of rock, around 10 ft high.
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kurtkyang
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posted 04-24-03 06:15 PM
quote:


Harvey, thanks! yes, I oversharpen it and original copy shows lots great detail.
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Jim Greenwood

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posted 04-24-03 06:18 PM
Often, the most unexpected and simple compositions are the most rewarding, especially in iconic locations like Arches N.P. Good job here. The clouds in the sky really add a lot of interest.

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可作my自题诗的插图！

我以为小草的描述不够突出，或许是仰角稍大了一点点。生命在这里是主体的对象，岩石占据的空间给人的视觉冲击力偏大了一点点。

谢谢极地蓝光兄.

几羡慕，技术＼地方＼用光
就我看来，石头还可以右偏几毫米

谢谢遵义老孟兄的意见。这是一个小景，无名石头和无名小草，没想到也会成为小作一张， 所以拍摄时多动脑筋，多观察。这是用24mm广角镜拍的， 广角镜最适合拍此类型片。

机位能不能再低点？天空压得很漂亮。

相机角度可以再低一点，天空、石头和小路的比例可以稍加调整，我认为路和前景的比例稍大了一点，应当适当增加天空的比例。(怀念北美纯净的天空)

很有震撼力，镜头稍高一点可能更好。

选的地方不错，如果再布局的好一点，就PERFECT了。能不能告诉我拍的时候有没有多暴一档

我一般都少暴半档. 每个机器的性能不一样. 这幅我没特意多暴.

喜欢！

好

.

不错.

我感觉地面太多了：）
不过很有震撼力

色彩饱满，构图严谨，难得的好片。
但是有点感觉头重脚轻，呵呵。

云天下，红土上，顽石一隅映骄阳。
天长兮，地久兮，日月伴我历沧桑。
——读片偶拾

天空再多一点就好了, 下面的空地可以少一点吗, 我是新手, 如果错了话, 希望木扬大师不要耻笑.

镜头角度稍高点是不是更好一点

不好，拍的什么啊，前景太杂了，也不知道你想表达什么？

高水平作品！

天空在多一点更好。

一些荒凉
一些忧郁
一点心声
一片希望。。。。

喜欢。。

天幕上云低欲盖，岩石傲然冲天，尽管枯木垂首而立，但草丛却生机盎然。一幅表现生命张力的好作品！

细读此作很有感想；坚硬高傲的岩石与红土细纱，蕴含的是一种永恒世界；死树和枯骨，代表的是失去的辉煌；眼前的小草和天上的白云，是历史瞬间的具体体现。所有的一切都表现得淋漓尽致，生命的意义在此得到诠释。

拍的绝好！石头占的空间很大，虽然他的形态和纹理都不太争气最终还是成为佩克先生极为赞赏的“不寻常拱形构图”的核心。

我看着这红石头如同一只怪兽挣扎着想要冲破这大自然的生死规律，祈求得到永恒的生命？但是，地上那些干枯的树枝和脆弱的小草，无疑给它的这种冲动，增添了不少讥讽和无奈。真的有时，我们凡人往往也有这样的私心杂念。哈，寓意深刻！满分！

伟大的瞬间。

片子美中不足我认为前景有点单调，中景过于满，远景可以再开阔一点。

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中部的景太满了。少了觉得更好。

空气透视度非常好。