云过乱，以木老师的作品来说还是欠佳

小弟浅见，拍风光照片不是须要三度空间的吗 ？这里只有前后而已。见谅。

hehe

这是夕阳那一张,前面的阳光阴影有点破坏了画面的整洁。其他都很好。

我看还是很不错的！

同意以上提法。换个角度提升气势。

同意肥老的意见，阴影的确不好。应该予以剔除。

真的没有阴影，是不是在纵深上少了一层次？
对木版要求应该高一些，4星。

同意郑兄意见。没有阴影，在纵深上少了一层次 ，但现在阴影在画面上占的比例过大。

我认为一切都恰到好处，阴影很好地起到了平衡作用和使画面有纵深感的作用；阴影使红土拱门更突出；阴影使这一作品增加了内涵 具有了张力。

有阴影效果好，只是阴影的线条不太美。

同意吴建衡.没有影子,反使得前景单调...给5分平衡一下.

同意吴建衡.没有影子底下的红土必然和拱门相抢，去掉前面 画面失衡。

阴影好。拱门后面的山却不好，把画面搞乱了。

谢谢大家批评, 如果有大问题, 阴影的确是问题所在. 我也吃不准. 大家的反馈证明了我的担心. 再次谢谢大家的真诚!!

I'n not so sure that I'd call this a "delicate" arch, but the rich colors are terrific. The sky is beautiful too, but I almost think that it might be too much sky. It's a little overpowering compared to the size of the arch. Also the shadow in the foreground is a little distracting because of it's irregular shape. It almost looks like the photographer's shadow, which would make the arch seem even smaller.

-- Jeannette McCabe


Colors are vibrant, think the amount of sky and clouds gives the shot a feel of activity.

-- Heather Chasteen


If you in fact shot this with Kodak Gold 100, then I commend you, for that film requires a bit of attention when metering given the complexity of lighting in this photograph. Except for the shadow, which was of course not for you to control, everything else is well placed. The balance is tilted a bit towards the right.
But, overall, this is a good exposure. Good job.

-- Gabriel Martinez-Aguirre



This subject is shot so often that the standards become very high. The foreground shadow is a major distraction. The aesthetics of the shot is due to the color and shape of the the subject itself, rather than your composition and lighting.

-- Carl Root


Wonderful colours. I don't like the foreground shadow.

-- Maurizio Cinti


Excellent!!

-- Dave K


Beautiful and great colors.

-- Juan Fernando Ochoa


Where?
Nice photo of oft photographed Delicate Arch. I love the clouds. Your description says this was taken in Colorado. Unless someone has redone the mapping, this is in Arches National Park in Utah.

-- Kim Ashby


Sorry this should be in Utah. Colorado is defaul place when I upload a photo. Kim, thank you!!

-- Kurt Yang (edit your comment)


Hi Kurt
First of all, well done for getting up there, quite a trek. This shot has nice composition, beautiful colours, great sky etc, but the shadows in the foreground do spoil it somewhat. Fabulous place isn't it ?
Alethea

-- Alethea Hollis

我觉得很美！是在什么地方？

记得谋大师说过,一张成功的风景照,必须配合了技术,时机,耐心+运气.这里还缺什么?

完美作品,喜欢........

4,7.分。佳作。

阴影有保留的必要，但能处理到退后一点的话就漂亮了。高质量的照片但还可以更好。

老外们对阴影的理解大部分从美学和摄影技术上要求，这也许是和中国人理解的概念有区别。按照中国传统文化的规律和美学观念，我们似乎要想得更深刻一些？


正如吴建衡 所说的“我认为一切都恰到好处，阴影很好地起到了平衡作用和使画面有纵深感的作用；阴影使红土拱门更突出；阴影使这一作品增加了内涵具有了张力。”

我赞同这样的说法！

阴影的出现，我不觉得它是累赘，关键是阴影里面描写的也很细腻，我们看到的红土拱门原来并不是这样子，只有经过数年风雨的冲刷，那红土拱门才能在磨难中变得如此壮观，令人赞叹。假如，我们尊重历史发展规律的话，假如，我们暗示或者寓意这阴影正在悄悄吞噬大自然的一切，也许，我们就不在讨厌这阴影的存在，反而，它便作为神来之笔，为我们加入更多的遐想！这将作为我给高分的理由。哈。

12楼的水。。我喜欢。